Friday, October 3, 2008

Tell me what you think?!!

So I am going to try my hand at the art of what is known as fanfiction story writing!! Yeah I know sounds korny!! Well I have been thinking about what I would like to write for a good while now and tonight I finally typed it out! So I am going to post it here and maybe on my livejournal account! I really need to get a beta, hint hint if anyone is interested!! So this is the first chapter! Tell me what you think and let me know if I need to write more. I need to think about chapter 2 and what direction I want it to go! It may depend on all you say about chapter one! Well without further delay here is my FIRST attempt at a Stargate Atlantis Fanfiction!!

Almost Trouble!

She couldn't remember how she ended up at the bottom of the side of the cliff. She tried to lift her head up from the soft moss where she had landed. But what happened? She askes herself that as she weakly tries to look around to see if she can find any of her team. When she tries to speak, all that comes out is a soft croak, "Sheppard?" She is amazed by this and tried to gather all the strength she has left deep inside her to call out one more time. As she starts to speak she begins to yell as she calls for the rest of her team, " Sheppard, Ronon, McKay, Beckett. Anyone out there?" But try as she might, she gets nothing in response. Then she realizes there is no sound anywhere in the forrest. This suprises her, as she tries again to lift her head she hears a shuffling in some leaves behind her. As she is trying to look behind her, gray quickly fills the sides of her line of sight. Then nothing except the blackness of unconsciousness.